All Comments on 'Topless in Paradise'

Big boobs, anything over a B are definitely not a turn on. All this double D writing only serves to confirm a lack of writing skills. Usually includes silliness like gallons of cum, girls gushing, swallowing semen and other impossible situations.

Nice idea. Too much narrative. Perhaps you could tell the story via the conversation between you and your wife?

The storytelling, that is, not Susan's breasts. Breaking the text up with a little dialogue would have helped, as we'd have heard her side of the situation.

Don't tell the author what his tastes are. Some people, myself included, like a more buxom woman. You don't, that's fine, but don't try to force your sexual preferences on others.

show me

I liked this playful little story. Yes, it could have used some dialog, but at least it wasn't 2 or 3 pages with no dialog. It would be nice if the author would continue with more stories of Susan giving in.

Just the right amount of sexy behavior and daring.

Great Story! I think the reluctance at first is very common, and adds to the sensation.

Enjoyed your story - sweet and sexy.

Goodness you Americans are so inhibited!