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It was short but more intriguing than half of the stories on here. Can't wait for an update. The story has already piqued an interest for me.

OMGoodness. Intense and somuch a part of my life. But now he is long gone from my world. He claims of love during sexual bliss. Leaving me lost and wondering why I allowed him to treat me in such a manner.

Here is to hoping you continue

More, more, more Please ! I wanna know more !

This ending really killed me

needs a little editing, but it looks as if you have real potential as a writer.

Five, for starters.

Thanks everyone who commented, favorited, read it and voted! This is my first submission and I think I've waited long enough. I will be updating soon, hopefully before April is out. Thanks again!:)

for the next chapter :-)

On to the next chapter...

More please