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Let's Have a Threesome

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/16/13

Groan!

So it is a Slow day and Not much going on. I decide to turn on my computer. So it comes on and I decide to check out Lit. So I finally get to the new stories and start reading this one. I start thinking about things and decide I want to post a comment. I didn't see any earlier massages posted here.
So I almost Decided to stop reading when I got to "...he slowly inserts one finger then another into your warm, wet pussy. So I am so hot now."
We are not sure if we will talk about this again, but is was a very strange. Time.

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by Anonymous01/16/13

"GROAN!"

is at least ambiguous. 'Misteria' might be not a native speaker.

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by NYNICEGUY201301/16/13

Threesome, Please

I have never had a threesome but when I do this will be the guideline I use. This author is magical with her words,

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by Anonymous01/16/13

Threesome

Loved your story. Keep it up. @ Groan - Would love to see what kind of a story you can write, I think this was very well written and enjoyed very much. Keep it up Mysteria.,

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by Rawmaster5001/16/13

Nice scenario

Yeah this is the sort of an experience that will either tear the group apart or lead to many repeat episodes. The drunkenness flavored the narrative, giving it a feeling of the actions being described right after the incident occurred. it would be nice to think something like that could go on for a long time, but I cannot see it lasting. If I am wrong i would love to hear how it worked for others

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by Anonymous01/16/13

Turned on my ass stories

This author makes it so real and I love how she was or described being fucked in her ass . I love vocal women who moan and squeal and squirm definite turn on.

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by ricksouza01/16/13

Huh?

All the comments I read thought this was a wonderful, well-written story, and I gave it only 2 stars. I thought the writing was awful. No dialogue, no one says anything. It's Jayne decided, Mark decides he will fuck me, we decide to watch a movie... Awful writing. Sorry -- I hated it. Keep trying. Maybe get an editor to make it more human. Rick

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by Anonymous01/17/13

Very hot

Believable and uber-hot erotica! Wow!

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by Anonymous01/18/13

Awful!

What a load of tripe!

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by Anonymous01/18/13

She can get me turned on with just one page

What a fantastic fantasy. For a short story it is very good .I wish I were Mark

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by Anonymous01/20/13

garbage

If it weren't for the sexual content, I would have thought this were written by a 5th grader.
It's so poorly written that I couldn't even finish it.
Don't quit your day job, honey!

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by Anonymous02/10/13

Mmmmm - another Girl/Girl scene - sooo hot!!! I can't help but think Mysteria27 has a secret desire for Girl-Girl-Guy evening of fun!

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