So it is a Slow day and Not much going on. I decide to turn on my computer. So it comes on and I decide to check out Lit. So I finally get to the new stories and start reading this one. I start thinking about things and decide I want to post a comment. I didn't see any earlier massages posted here.
So I almost Decided to stop reading when I got to "...he slowly inserts one finger then another into your warm, wet pussy. So I am so hot now."
We are not sure if we will talk about this again, but is was a very strange. Time.
is at least ambiguous. 'Misteria' might be not a native speaker.
I have never had a threesome but when I do this will be the guideline I use. This author is magical with her words,
Loved your story. Keep it up. @ Groan - Would love to see what kind of a story you can write, I think this was very well written and enjoyed very much. Keep it up Mysteria.,
Yeah this is the sort of an experience that will either tear the group apart or lead to many repeat episodes. The drunkenness flavored the narrative, giving it a feeling of the actions being described right after the incident occurred. it would be nice to think something like that could go on for a long time, but I cannot see it lasting. If I am wrong i would love to hear how it worked for others
This author makes it so real and I love how she was or described being fucked in her ass . I love vocal women who moan and squeal and squirm definite turn on.
All the comments I read thought this was a wonderful, well-written story, and I gave it only 2 stars. I thought the writing was awful. No dialogue, no one says anything. It's Jayne decided, Mark decides he will fuck me, we decide to watch a movie... Awful writing. Sorry -- I hated it. Keep trying. Maybe get an editor to make it more human. Rick
Believable and uber-hot erotica! Wow!
What a load of tripe!
What a fantastic fantasy. For a short story it is very good .I wish I were Mark
If it weren't for the sexual content, I would have thought this were written by a 5th grader.
It's so poorly written that I couldn't even finish it.
Don't quit your day job, honey!
Mmmmm - another Girl/Girl scene - sooo hot!!! I can't help but think Mysteria27 has a secret desire for Girl-Girl-Guy evening of fun!
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