All Comments on 'My Brother's Love'

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rosspalrosspalover 11 years ago
Great Story

I hope you continue this. It's a really good story line and you tell it well.5+

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
not good

way to rushed no background and an unrealistic rush to sex. wheres the character build up? wheres the plot build up? wheres the end?

Paul_ChancePaul_Chanceover 11 years ago
Very Good

I found it well written and erotic - a good job of building the anticipation and it had a nice narrative flow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good story .

I don't know how I missed this story .I liked it a lot. I would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
fraternity girls?

men belong to a fraternity; women belong to sororities. if you're going to write with college situations, at least know the language.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Great story. More to come?

lexx1057lexx1057almost 9 years ago

I love this please continue❤

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
anonymous

That stupid and false statement about black people looking alike was uncalled for

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOnealmost 6 years ago
Hell Yeah!

Look out Eric Jerome and Zane...you have some impressive company. Love the descriptiveness and flow of the story. Please keep up the good work and hope to read more in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LOVED IT...GOOD TALE! FIVE STARS.

SatyrDickSatyrDick9 months ago

[09.07.23]

Tres Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

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