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The depth of my crazy

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31701/14/13

AND WHEN TROUBLE APPEARS

call the asylum. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Butterflies51201/14/13

The asylum

Tazz, if it turns out I am crazy, I will be checking into the asylum. I promise.

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by Desejo01/14/13

Your poems have good flow and rhythm. I don't think the first line adds much to the poem, and you may want to consider selective use of capitalization.

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