All Comments on 'Kelly and Our Dancers Ch. 01'

by msanders1212

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OneIBlindOneIBlindabout 11 years ago
Wait..I mean wh...where's the story

You had the makings of a very fun story with all kinds of possibilites, but then you left us hanging... I would call this a tease because you talked a good game but didn't give enough of a "feel" to think I got something! Now it's time to deliver on that and put out Part 2 through 5 if they're going to follow suit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Boring and pathetic attempt to pull the reader in, not enough to get me to come back and read more. 1*

msanders1212msanders1212about 11 years agoAuthor
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Sorry, guys, I am new here... I shoulda given some more in the first chapter. Your comments are fair.

I have five more written. One is "pending" and should be released in a couple days, others will be released quickly thereafter. There will be about 10 chapters to this story, I think.

Much of this is real, and she is reading this with a great deal of enthusiasm. You are reading each chapter at the same time as she is.

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
What?!?

What is the story here? Her husband is a cuckold, we know that. Does he know it? Her husband is hung up on black folks? So now her lover hires a black escort who bring two other studs with him? They are going to dance, are they bi? Is her lover bi? Explain please

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