All Comments on 'Desperate in the Lift'

cant wait to read it again

omy best peeing story i'ver read in years hope theres a part 2 asap thanks

Do continue.

Fantastic story. Well done.

I need more of this......

so well written !!

Thoroughly enjoyed reading that. Will there be a follow up?

Look forward to the Kinky Kontinuation.

U should do one about in da office like sneak off 2 the lift, supply closet or ur office or something don't u think...

Really enjoyed this story.

The thought of a girl dying to pee in a lift is great but the story is so much better by having another girl there to witness her desperation.

I love the bit where she pees all over her friend and imagines it soaking through her blouse!

I loved it, Luna. Thanks. Looking forward to the next chapter.

great twist as the end. very hot piss story. well done.

There needs to be additional chapters for this story line, please? :-)

This story is part of Dripping Wet, as is the sequel "Going in the garden." Visit lunaswift.com to find out more about me and my books.

Good story & well written.

Very hot. IS there anything better than lesbian watersports? I thought the ending was a bit unnecessary (the daydreaming part) but the raunchy detail throughout was great.

I'm absolutely throbbing! Exactly the erotica thrill I've been craving. Now I need to go change my panties ;)

how could she go months without an orgasm? i‘m not criticizing your story, just, are people really going that long without one?