All Comments on 'Fantasy Father'

How about writing an actual one?

Great Father/Daughter interaction. Like sword play thrust and parry. The father's tee time could have been next week, however he need a way out of the house: "NOW!"

Ignore Anonymous below: this is a cracking first chapter. Not every story has to lay it all out on the first page, and if you write more like this I and others will be more than happy to wait for it and read it in bits.

I am wanting to see how this progresses...

I like the slow progression of this story. The banter, the open minded conversation between father and daughter. Is he excited? Is she jealous? Is he running to keep from revealing his boner? Me likes!

I will be following this one.

Makes me horny

It;s a set up for a beautiful story to come. Love it.

Excellent writing, baby ~ Got my undivided attention. 💋💋💋