All Comments on 'Summer Fun'

by kdanilove

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Vlad2010Vlad2010over 11 years ago
Series?

Nice story. You could make a good series from this start. You might want to consider an editor to catch the typos and grammar.

girlslikethis84girlslikethis84over 11 years ago
mmmmmmmmm

this was so hot and sexy and total turn on wish i coulda joined in :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good, but...

nice story but needs a bit of editing.

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