by CynthiaTheMoonGoddess
this is a fabulous intro, and a wonderful take on the tale. Looking forward to the (hopefully somewhat more explisit) later chapters! Please keep up the great work!
I like the set-up. It could use more emotion and greater details, but that's nitpicking. I already love this story and you do tell it very well. I hope you have longer and many more chapters.
I didn't have use to my laptop this week until now so I will be starting on chapter 2 this week and have it posted by Friday.
You're off to a great start! :) Please continue the story! Don't leave us hanging! I've been checking everyday hoping for ch 2 of this story. :)