by SwitchMami
It's surprising where the mind will go, but I'm glad yours went there...great short & naughty little story...very arousing...
Well done Darling girl, The way you managed to fit all that action in a short story like that is incredible. Don't stop that imagination. Let it flow like fresh juices... xoxo
oh - - very hot. I liked it very much. I wish I could get caught watching videos like that!
I loved it! You must keep writing.....you need too. You have a skill for getting to the point & making such an arousing story. Did I mention I loved it?
A lovely erotic adventure. The home office thing was a great twist............ You need to write more ;) Well done!
Everybody's comments are amazing! Just wanted to say a big "thank you" and let my little fan club know that I'm currently trying to flesh out a couple of new stories, one being a potential collaborative effort with a dear friend, and another with my first-draft editor. Much love to all, and ALL feedback is appreciated!
Mmm to catch a girl in such a predicament would be a treat although I'd watch her finish first then finish her off... Your version is delicious as well.
But neglected to comment. Enjoyed your first. Eagerly awaiting your next submissions. Keep writing
The visual I got while reading it was amazing. I hope you write more.