All Comments on 'Shelby's Surprise'

by SwitchMami

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SimoneLisbonSimoneLisbonabout 11 years ago
Woo Hoo!

It's surprising where the mind will go, but I'm glad yours went there...great short & naughty little story...very arousing...

DaddyCeannDaddyCeannabout 11 years ago
Short Sharp To the POINT

Well done Darling girl, The way you managed to fit all that action in a short story like that is incredible. Don't stop that imagination. Let it flow like fresh juices... xoxo

into_meinto_meabout 11 years ago
nice!

oh - - very hot. I liked it very much. I wish I could get caught watching videos like that!

nflgirl81nflgirl81about 11 years ago
Fantastic!

I loved it! You must keep writing.....you need too. You have a skill for getting to the point & making such an arousing story. Did I mention I loved it?

UhlBWettUhlBWettabout 11 years ago
Very Hot!

A lovely erotic adventure. The home office thing was a great twist............ You need to write more ;) Well done!

SwitchMamiSwitchMamiabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Everybody's comments are amazing! Just wanted to say a big "thank you" and let my little fan club know that I'm currently trying to flesh out a couple of new stories, one being a potential collaborative effort with a dear friend, and another with my first-draft editor. Much love to all, and ALL feedback is appreciated!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
hey

OMG that is the best story I read on here your amazing

MasterDaddy72MasterDaddy72about 11 years ago
very nice

Mmm to catch a girl in such a predicament would be a treat although I'd watch her finish first then finish her off... Your version is delicious as well.

peachesmelbapeachesmelbaabout 11 years ago
Voted early

But neglected to comment. Enjoyed your first. Eagerly awaiting your next submissions. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story!!!

The visual I got while reading it was amazing. I hope you write more.

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