All Comments on 'Lori Ch. 04'

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myassisdraginmyassisdraginabout 11 years ago
Greatbstory series

Well written stories and the way you ended chapter four leaves you open to continue which I, and probably a few others, wish you would do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Brilliant work

Really enjoying the series and hope you continue this fine work

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 11 years ago
I'm surprised...

Lori's father gave in. It's not easy for a father to let go of his teenage daughter, especially when she hasn't graduated from high school yet. Although love conquers all, and even though she's technically an adult, there are still a lot of things Lori and Mike need to learn. A great story, though--five stars, at least.

ScattySueScattySuealmost 10 years ago

I loved the plot twist of the issues with Lori's parents: agreat piece of story telling.

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