All Comments on 'Beep, Bang, Boom'

by carlieplum

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IrisPierceIrisPierceabout 11 years ago

Loved it, what a naughty ending!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Too Short

It was just starting to be a nice little story, built up the expectation of a fun day and some evening events and then - bang, boom, closed it off before going anywhere except to a quickie before the real day started. Should have kept writing and filled it in. what you did do was good enough though. Good luck.

Series 6Series 6about 11 years ago
A cute little snapshot of domestic life

I liked it. Well told

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice story but vey short

Nice story but very short .

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