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Beep, Bang, Boom

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by Anonymous

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by IrisPierce01/22/13

Loved it, what a naughty ending!

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by Anonymous01/30/13

Too Short

It was just starting to be a nice little story, built up the expectation of a fun day and some evening events and then - bang, boom, closed it off before going anywhere except to a quickie before the real day started. Should have kept writing and filled it in. what you did do was good enough though. Good luck.

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by Series 601/31/13

A cute little snapshot of domestic life

I liked it. Well told

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by Anonymous02/28/13

Nice story but vey short

Nice story but very short .

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