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I Really Don't Know Ch. 03

bySweetFutanari©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/24/13

This is hot

More please

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by DarkSoul_Dragon02/01/13

nice work but you could use alittle more character divelopment in a story like this

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by Anonymous02/03/13

More

This is really awesome

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by Mr_Owlow06/29/13

Nice idea, but...

It needs some serious editing, it is really disruptive when you have to pause your reading to figure out the meaning of what you just read. I would also have liked to see more inside the main characters head, his/her feelings about his transformation and the different sensations of her new body. Please keep on writing, the story was still really hot, but please, make use of an editor!

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