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by Jim4444401/24/13

Short and sexy

Very good erotic imagery.

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by Anonymous01/24/13

Not truly a Story

But it would be a good section to add into a full story, perhaps included as a letter or as part of a series of letters. The writing is good if not excitin g but you need to work on description. Why is everything done "slowly"?

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by hoo_hoo_boo02/02/13

I loved the energy and the way she was so sure of what she wanted. Thank you

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