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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
I think you could have begged with more passion, less words and

fewer cliches, but you do show some promise nonetheless. Do keep writing. Sweet O.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THAT IS NOT HURTING

it spraying with jism. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Bill's love did spot & smear Monica's dress

In the Oval Office , no less !!

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