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Pleasure & Taboo

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by Anonymous

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by Dougntexas01/21/13

Amazing Story...............

Great as usual. I loved it.

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by Anonymous01/21/13

thank you

That was beautiful...

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by Anonymous01/21/13

a great story, HeyAll!

Nothing beats a boy blowing his balls up his own mother's cunt.

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by LAROC01/21/13

Hot Hot Hot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story line, (the son) he's a writer,(the mother) she's an actress. This sounds like a story in the making. Now you have taken us this far, lets finish the film. They have only read the first few pages of the script. and it sounds like they like to adlib a bit. PLEASE add a second chapter, this has been a great read.....THANK YOU....LAROC OF AGES

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by Rawmaster5001/21/13

Excellent story

I think we are going to need to read a lot of stories about these two. i know I would at least. You have a good ear for the dialog of the two characters and the story moves well. i somehow find it hard to believe the son was as reluctant to film his naked mommy as he believes he was. 5 stars and a request for more.

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by Anonymous01/21/13

Now I'm thinking about my aunt again...

It's going to be another four hours before she's home from work, but when she gets here...

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by William smyth01/21/13

A great discovery

The New Story section of Literotica led me to this fine five star story and subsequently to the very extensive list of the authors other contributions on one of my favorite themes.
If they are all as good as Pleasure & Taboo I have a lot of good reading ahead.

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by Erotonaut01/21/13

Strong start to a potential series

The story arc was nicely handled, as was the general description, but particularly impressive was the dialogue, which didn't feel forced as it often does in these stories.

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by Oz199901/21/13

Wow!

Thoroughly enjoyed the story & look forward to more ... keep it up lol

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by 1nut1der01/21/13

Fresh

Very good, fresh twist of a scenario! The Mother/Son storylines have become too boilerplate, same old stuff over and over. 5 stars from me.....

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by Chrispe01/21/13

You have done it again

Another one of your amazing erotic stories. A little shorter than your others which makes me thing there maybe a continuation. Thank you.

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by Morlan50201/21/13

Great, as usual!

I do enjoy your stories, and as usual, this one did not disappoint!

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by Anonymous01/21/13

Interesting premise

I liked how they get "connected" through a script and the lead up to their coitus doesn't seemed forced at all. You can see where it's going once the mother adds her own experiences. However, you seemed to leave out critical description of the sex. Describe in detail the buildups to their orgasms. Does she bite his shoulder? What does he feel before he ejaculates? Does she squirt when she cums, as she indicates she might during him pleasuring her orally? You should get the idea. ;)

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by digdaddyrich01/22/13

Nicely done

I thought it was clever the way they moved from script to real life and enjoyed each others bodies.

I can only think that this was just the start of a very hot and erotic sexual relationship between mom and son.

Thanks for the read.

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by Eric_Shift01/22/13

Please, Could you write the shower scene.

That's one of my biggest fetishes.
Sex in the shower.

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by Anonymous01/22/13

sensual

terrific plot allow him to suck her bosoms n navel let them soap each other in the shower wooow aaaaaaahhhhhhh let him finger her in warm shower and there should be a liplock for sure

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by sweetsforhoney01/22/13

Nice

If I had a son, this is what I would love to do with him.

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by bettyluvsit01/22/13

Good

A very good intimate story of mom and son, well done
i enjoyed it and was turned on

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by Anonymous01/23/13

great overall story

first of all let me start by saying great build up and good job on making it realistic. second of all great way to use the acting career of the mother as a drive and as a gateway. i loved how it was that awkward sence of feeling for the son yet the professionalism for the mother. i also like how it was clear on way everything was clear and to the point. i would love to see a second chapter based on their lust growing into pure love and to see them both suceeding in the movie business. now with all that being said PLEASE give us more.

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by Anonymous01/24/13

Plot?

wow . .a plot that got me reading faster and faster as I went, but not allowing myself to miss a word. One of the best stoies I've read here. I look forward to the follow ups!

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by ironsoldier8001/25/13

cut and print

Another FANTASTIC story Heyall. Great build up and awesome dialogue. Good dialogue is so hard to write. That story just let me with one question (which of course brings out the need for additional chapter). Did he end up selling the film to the studio to get it produced with his mom as lead actress? I have no doubt he did, but it never factual til it is written. I believe we would all appreciate a continuation.

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by homerjay01/28/13

awesome

very hot and original.thanks.

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by Anonymous01/28/13

One of the very best

Great story, the begining, the middle and the end. Just wish it was longer..

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by librertin02/03/13

Begs for...

2 or three sequels/chapters, nice buildup and hesitant initial approaches! Characters can develop furher effortlessly and deserve to!

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by Anonymous02/05/13

WONDERFUL STUFF!

Hot!!

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by xxxpuppies02/07/13

Nice work!

I have to read over and over again!

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by Anonymous02/11/13

epic!!!

Outstanding story!

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by Anonymous02/12/13

Well told. Is there a sequel?

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by bigdaddyg12303/25/13

Pleasure & Taboo

Thus far, I've not gotten the emotional charge that a true and honest mother and son incestual first coupling should bring about. It's like eating watermelon that doesn't have the right amount of salt on it--too much makes it sour and too little makes it just bland water flavored, but just the right amount, it's sweet and delicious and it tastes like heaven!! This story lacks enough salt as I feel it is more of a lust story looking for a vehicle to be voyeurist while getting some "strange nookie" on the side; there is no deep abiding true love present nor exhibited as a model son and mother incestual story should display.

The theme of the story is good, though seemingly being rigged for ulterior motives. The characters display good dislogue and lots of banter, especially Mother. The writing is pretty good considering the plot is somewhat askewed with little of the mother and son love displayed. The story has great thrills and sexual ennuendos, and the visual effects are very good.

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by sumptuouscove04/11/13

Blissful....!!!

Wow what a story there...Amazing it is...
The plot was built slowly and sensually between Mother and son which I liked the most...!! Please write a similar story with these kind of build-up....!!!

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Nice one..

It is one of the best story I have read in a long time.. Thumps Up.. U are awesome writer..Hope to see more of this stories..

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by Anonymous09/01/13

very erotic

very well written. proper grammar and sentence structure. nice story line too. wish the sex had been built up a little more but was very hot though. hope part2 is soon

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by Erotonaut03/31/14

Just reread this, and remained as impressed as I was more than a year ago.

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by Anonymous07/16/14

Excellent!

This definitely filled the main vein!

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by DebbieX10/28/14

Awesome story

Making a sex film with my son. That would be the ultimate thing,

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