All Comments on 'Her Confession'

He should of got one free 'get out of jail card' before he forgave her ...

with believable emotion, tension, suspense. May I suggest the modern literary "cool" of no quotation marks really doesn't work. Writing is a visual experience for the reader, and not only imaginative visual. Dispensing with quotation marks has a way of detaching the characters, making their speech as sterile as mathmatical symbols.

If you cannot be bothered to properly indicate speech and follow basic English grammar, do not expect anyone to be bothered reading your work.

Sorry about the puncuation. I wrote it on my phone. I will definately be more punctual in the future. And thank you for your commments.

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C j

An engaging, believable story.

Lack of punctuation didn't bother me.