by Bluepen451
Man that is great prose. Straight to favorites.
A good story! I would have really liked a part 2 to finish it up though. It seemed like the first half of a great story. Just me though. 3 stars.
Bill S.
Public fondling followed by public sex with someone you just met, too much fun. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I liked this story a great deal. It's a nice fuck story. The plot is familiar, and often used. The seduction scene was well-done, with public foreplay and then a kind of public fucking in the rain. It's a dangerous practice in a thunderstorm. I thought the ending was lame. What kind of guy would have a horney-busty female at hand, so to speak, and then make a date for the next night when they have the rest of the night to get to "know" each other?