All Comments on 'Olivia and Derrick Ch. 04'

Im so happy i been waiting for this lol.very hot sex scence im lovingthis story so more again please

That dream was hott. Nice one. Pls keep writing and do something to mak that bitch of a roommate shut up. I think olivia is going to run away from Derrick when he comes for her.love this story so cool. I lik that her friend said she likes him too but will stay away just for her. Thats a real best friend. Im glad i have one of thoses.

I really love this series but its disappointing how long you take to update. I know that you have a life and all lol but waiting several weeks for a story that is only one page long is a huge turn off. Four stars ****

I agree with StMaartenFreak. Loving this story but the length of of the chapter made me a little frustrated knowing it would be a few weeks until the next one. I will still wait patiently for chapter five.

I love this series can't wait for more honestly!!

Gurl, you are the queen of short chapters and cliff hangers. You could be a writer for soap operas.