The Wall and Goat Ch. 03

Great chapter!! I really like the emotional factor. You added the mystery of the question of who does he remind Jesse of? The addition of his feeling that his first kiss was 'stolen' was great too. I think you're doing a great job of developing the characters. My question will be that if he and Jesse end up together will Jesse be seeing Maxie for him or as a replacement of this lost love? Jesse is also a case of not being able to accept himself too, so I can't see him leaving the closet any time soon.
~cannd

Excited when I see a new chapter of this!

So glad you're posting these so quickly! Starting to get a feel for the characters and I'm really enjoying the story. Thanks!!

Soo trapped by this story! Can't wait to read more.
What happened to Jesse in the past? DON DON DON DON !!!
lol, awesome job,keep up the great writing.
:)

Really good story. I like the characters and the setup. I think Paul and Guy are turning into two of my favorites and I like Maxie's grandmother.

wishing i was there

i wish it was me being kissed but i wouldnt punch the guy who kissed me i would return the kiss and hope he wanted a hole lot more from me

Like this story alot. And I'm so onboard with Maxies grandfathers saying with the horn thing:-) So true! Hope that Jess will let Maxie know who he remind him off. It must be someone who he really loved or get hurt by. I take it that Jess isn't openly gay...
Keep it up and don't leave us hanging for too long :-)

I am loving this story

Fantastic, well constructed characters and a crazy mixed up bag of emotions. I can practically feel Maxie's confusion and frustration fizzing in my veins as I read.
Keep an eye on your spell and grammar check and you'll have perfection.

I know it's going to turn out that Jesse has some kind of super-sized issue and got really hurt by someone but he's an ass. Hating someone for reminding you of another person is low and what he did to Maxie was wrong.