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Rescuing Layna Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Edwarus01/25/13

Likin

Like your story cant wait to see what happens

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by J0SE01/25/13

Still here and ready for more

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by Anonymous01/25/13

Ongoing, Excellent Backstory

You are doing very well--playing hardball with her motivations and past. You're well beyond the usual monster-lovestory here. Very impressed indeed.

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by Anonymous01/26/13

is he going to...

is he going to go beg to be turned into a drider somehow now?

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by Feotakahari03/18/13

Interesting. I see a couple different ways this could go, and I'll be interested to learn which one you pick. I'll be waiting patiently for this to update.

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