All Comments on 'someday late or soon'

I love the line : all pinings consigned to pine and the tree imagery. This is very evocative- so much so that I do not think you actually needed to use the word tomb in the poem at all. I think the weakest line is " all joys given to memory" - it just doesn't make sense to me (whose memory?). Overall, I liked this very much.

for us all, If we are lucky. TK U MLJ LV NV

very evocative - and I love the return to the first line, coming full circle.