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by ReefBeach

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
learn the

The author needs serious help in learning the commonly used slang terms for this kind of story. Short course its "cum" for semen or an orgasm NOT "come" which shows lack of knowledge.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 11 years ago
Ignore the previous ignorant poster.

The story's lovely. My only concern is your use of '&' instead of 'and'.

Keep writing, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice story

I really liked this story and I hope there will be a follow up soon :-)

PS: We don't care about little slang errors^^

yesterdaysyesterdaysover 8 years ago

Very hot and sensual start to this story! ++ Looking forward to the next chapters.

amarlanamarlanalmost 8 years ago
Exhilarating

I can identify myself with your lead character Nick and be lost in the world of sexual experience of a young man.

ReefBeachReefBeachalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I hope you enjoy the other chapters!

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I want to write and read interesting, believable stories, although a touch of humour or the bizarre will usually help! Most importantly, I want to respect my characters. I see too much disrespect in the sex we see around, especially for women.

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