by ReefBeach
The author needs serious help in learning the commonly used slang terms for this kind of story. Short course its "cum" for semen or an orgasm NOT "come" which shows lack of knowledge.
The story's lovely. My only concern is your use of '&' instead of 'and'.
Keep writing, please.
I really liked this story and I hope there will be a follow up soon :-)
PS: We don't care about little slang errors^^
Very hot and sensual start to this story! ++ Looking forward to the next chapters.
I can identify myself with your lead character Nick and be lost in the world of sexual experience of a young man.