All Comments on 'The Last Room'

Kinda confusing story did she do it with him or not?

Future reference, you shouldn't be so quick to judge a city. I have lived in Buffalo for 20 years and it is far from being "armpit" country. It is rich with history and architecture. You will lose readers by making insulting comments like that. You also need to work on your delivery, you rushed into the sexual aspect so fast that you lost any interesting point you may have had. You definitely need more work on your writing skills.

You have to reread to figure out what really happened. You should, it's a good short one.

I've driven between Buffalo and Cleveland enough to figure she probably got stuck in Erie, there's little between Erie and Buffalo.

I'd love to read a follow-up.