All Comments on 'Vickilicious Ch. 02'

First I commented on your first part for you gave the reader nothing to really make them excited for part 2, and here you are posting part 2 on the same day? Why not just post it together? Also on top of it, again you didn't leave anything to make us crave more.

Look I know this is a free site,but if you are going to allow comments then take into account what we have to say for in this case it will really benefit YOU in future posts. Hold off on part 3 and post a lot more of the story. Like right after something really good happens.Granted this part caught my interest, but was far from a cliff hanger. You have potential but your parts are just way too short. 1 again.

I absolutely loved this story. Can't wait to read the rest your a great writer!

-XOXO, FS.