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Caretakers - Daddy's Mistress

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by nightshadow01/28/13

Almost but not quite incest

This certainly brings up the taboo *interest* of incest in the story, how Sharon might be lured into experimenting with it later on, but there was no real sexual interaction between her and her father. Therefore, it's not *quite* incest... yet. Nice intro to a much more complicated story, though, which I sincerely hope you'll continue!

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by Bambi_Doe01/28/13

I like how she's so concern about her mom dying alone & single if daddy leaves for another woman. But doesn't seem to care if he leaves mom or betrays the mom if dad was to fuck Sharon. Talking about he was thinking about me bitch when she sees him with Stacey. But then goes what about mom after. She's a trifling daughter in my eyes because she pretends that she cares about her mom getting hurt but she doesn't. I'm not saying she doesn't love her mom but she needs to be real with herself.

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by TheMedi8or01/29/13

Thoughts and Intentions

I am trying with this story to show everyone's confusion and pain when torn between what they want and what society says they SHOULDN'T want. I always shake my head on this site when I read the stories that say "I want bang my (insert relative here) but it's wrong. Oh to hell with it, it feels good" I suppose it makes for good fantasy, but it never feels real to me. On the other hand, being torn between feeling you don't understand & are told you shouldn't have and your equally strong desire to care for your family I imagine would cause some serious mental confusion. I hope I succeeded at least a little! Glad it provoked some thought anyways. -tM

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by imharmless6901/30/13

Well done

The doubt, the confusion, the lust are all here. Can't wait to see where they go next.

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