All Comments on 'Waiting for the Locksmith'

it was leading on to become good, but u stopped way to soon!

Well-written, and with interesting potential.

Sometimes less is more. Interesting premise and a sort of teasing narrative, well written, that left lots to the imagination.

Original, funny and well-written; I just wish there had been more of it!

Very well done and thank you.

my we have some more

I hope this is the start a multi parter. You've done some good character development now gives sex.

Fun little story withe potential for more.

Enjoyable tale, but you should have indicated that this was the first of a multi-part story in your title to be fair to your readers. If you have no part 2, etc., then you have cheated your readers because this story needs at least one follow up.

Excellent, Excellent Excellent. Great dialog, no suspension of belief. realistic characters.

Chilley

Love your writing immensely.

Hector,

Came here from the Feedback Forum - what a wonderful, crisp little tale, great dialogue, a silly but believable premise (having spent years in a campus college myself, this is totally believable). Left perfectly with Mindy's perfect tease, nothing more needs to be said. Yeah.

funny

Hi Hector:

Delightfully hilarious!

While reading your wonderful story I laughed more than I have for the past week.

Sign me

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