All Comments on 'Every Night'

The passion of this story is deeply moving. Bravo!

very passionate. and super romantic. perfect for Valentine's Day

Very well written. Really enjoyed it.

the intensity was amazing i loved the story fabulous work :)

word cannot describe how amazing this story was

the room mate kind of reminded me of Christian Grey from the book 50 shades of gray

I love the way the scenes lead into each other. Thank you

what is really going on.

he was having an affair with Karen,

the miles of separation in the three feet they are apart is more than symbolic of

the chasm created in what once was

the ring on her finger was given to her at their wedding.

and the guarantee had been broken.

One weird dude...

Standing ovation!!!!!!

One of the best short stories ever written on this site.

Ok so

First> angry hot roommate man with thick fingers

Second> horny/lonely female roommate who wants a piece of that

Also> Roommate man likes to go into her room at night and just sorta creep?

Then> in TENTS dinner scene where the guy gets all mad for some reason and the girl gets all mad and calls him out for his At Night Creeping™ And starts to cry in the floor

THEN> (Now this is the part that confused me the most) He kneels down and gives her a RING, and for what now? I mean I guess they’re in love and all but damn already?

then> he drags her to the mystical upstairs where they dongle (and that whole thing was actually really sexy)

So hmm? The whole thing with him being emotionless and the girl being...idrk but that Ring Thing™ Really confused the heck outta me

Hi I’m the commenter who made that comment on 2/9/20 and I just wanna say

Karen