All Comments on 'The Boss'

Nicely written, but almost could have been taken from the script of 'The Secretary' with only a few changes. The changes though were erotic and fun to read, and so made the story that little different from the film, although I am not sure it was different enough to completely avoid the suggestion of plagerism.

Having said that, I did enjoy both the film and your story.

An interesting observation but with stories around like Secretary or 50 shades etc that everyone knows, are there really any original erotic story lines anymore? For the record, this is a story/fantasy I've had long before the Secretary. Thanks for reading!

Keep writing! I would really like to see more of a smoother progression into the erotic part of the story, but loved the detail you put into it. Check out one of my stories and feel free to give any feedback too, thumbs up!