All Comments on 'The Dreamer'

Interesting concept, write more!

...of an editor.

Cloths should be clothes.

Barley should be barely

You're getting their/there/they're and your/you're mixed up too.

Interesting concept though.

Please write more, it's a very good story with a interesting concept

I really liked the story and hope there will be a next part

You can't even keep the name of your main character straight.