All Comments on 'You’ve Got Mail Ch. 01'

this one was sick enough

Any WACC wank story

A willing cuck story. All cucks should die in agonizing pain.

Interesting premise. She casually tells him about an affair she had in an attempt to calm his nerves... "Don't worry about this guy blackmailing you, I've already fucked another guy before, no big deal." He doesn't bat an eye. Very odd. Thanks.

How comforting to have your wife tell you everything is okay because she had an affair. Hmmm. First I would beat the shit out of the blackmailer, then I'd have him arrested. If the company didn't like it I'd sue them for workplace harassment and take a fat settlement from them. Then I'd teach the cheating bitch a lesson. No mention of kids, so it would probably mean dumping the slut, hard with as little money as possible.

The premise of the story is good - so far - and there's some originality which I always enjoy. I don't know quite where it's leading so I'll reserve judgement for now - and I'll look forward to the next part.

Sorry about the last comment. I wanted to say that I found your writing very good and enjoyed the beginning quite a bit. I think the storyline was engaging up until the point where he gets turned on by the thought of his wife having sex with another guy. At that point, it got very predictable and a little sloppy. She tells him about her affair, he doesn't react. She tells him she will never have sex with another guy again, but lets enjoy talking about my previous affair and see where it leads. She hits the nail on the head and says her sin was way worse than his. Bingo! Even if ultimately he is aroused by his wife's previous dalliance, he should be struggling with this sudden realization. That would have given it a bit of authenticity and been more in keeping with how you began the tale, with him agonizing over his feelings.

I see this is chapter one. I predict in subsequent chapters she ends up fucking another guy, true to her nature as a cheater. I even predict she ends up fucking the big dicked coworker who is trying to blackmail her husband. And they call this category loving wives?

Again, I liked how the story began and would have loved to read about a guy getting these pictures, trying to solve this puzzle about his wife, and being justifiably angry and outraged by the discovery. Thanks.

Good writing, as usual. Short and to the point. There's no need for a sequel.

Something I haven't come across in LW before. I look forward to seeing when you take us. Thank you.

no twist on being a WACC, cheating whore and hubby's ok with. only new in the minds of those wife watching wanna be's

Was a fan, now your just another WACC writer like the other losers. And you used to write Such nice story's what a shame

great story.... anxious to see where it goes from here!

A must read story for all men who feel secure and forget to take care of their little lady. Very clever and holds your attention.

A quick, flip and voluble read, the author opted to raise dust and then drop the curtain. As a disposable inquest into values and carnality, this is first rank.

I like reading your stories but frankly I am always worried about where you are going to take us.....this one was interesting, the guy learned something new about himself, Erika was able to confess and clear her conscience (although he took her cheating a bit too calmly.....) a bit and they both confirmed their love...so...thanks!!!!!!!!

As usual the Lynn production line of top rate stories continues....another original and believeable story....thank you!

Thank you. Enjoyed your story.

You are a good writer, but it's really a shame that you can't get away from the cuck stories no matter what! We all know where this is going in the next chapters Lynn! Suprise us for a change!

Interesting start, i look forward to the next chapter.

Very promising

I'll enjoy waiting for the next chapter. Thank you!

I liked this a lot. A proper story, told without sentiment or cliche. I think the eroticism is in the idea and the idea is erotic to both sexes and that's enough.

Ending it here. The only direction this could go is down.

I certainly hope you don't stop writing your cuck stories. Some of the folks who bitch about the contents of your writing should maybe consider reading something else. If they don't like cuckold stories and they know that's what you write about then MOVE THE F*#K ON!!

Oh, loved the new story. Can't wait for the next part.

He LUUVVVES her. The solution to all problems, especially if one is a cuck!

Only trouble is, it really was his wife. Destroyed him, her and the marriage and she told he boyfriend to sling his hook for doing it.

or are you already working on it:)

Contrived nonsense - hugely entertaining. Hubby is led down the road to hell by a ball-clutch. Thanks for writing 4*

A little disjointed, but it has a good start. The adultery thing came in out of the blue and needed more work to make it fit. Just another down on men story from one of the best.

The answer is blatantly obvious. 4*s

What a moron, it pretends to have a dick by calling itself x_witless_x. Of course witless means he has no fucking brain.

LynnGKS,

sorry, but i know the why you are divorced... put a warning:"willing cuckold" next time.

I'd say let her get fucked next time.

the 1 sentence, "I thought of that hairy ass and that big thick cock and got another hard on," made this a closet-gay story.

Will there be future chapters?

A very good short story

I like that he trusted his wife enough to confess to her about what was happening to him and his work world and how he became excited over thinking of her fucking someone else.and then take her advise to confront his black-mailer.

A nice read with a good ending.

Thanks Lynn. Nice story and innovative approach.

A believable and well written scenario. Two people in love and gives promise to a couple sharing their fantasies and experiences for the health of their realtionship.

"you should not write from the man's perspective.

the 1 sentence, "I thought of that hairy ass and that big thick cock and got another hard on," made this a closet-gay story."

That is so stupid. Lynn was tormenting the man in the story that is wife might by having sex with someone with a bigger cock and very masculine - like me - not a gay at all. As a brilliant writer she was getting into the mind of a man's worst dread, that is wife might be get fucked by some hairy arsed beast with a bigger dick. Lynn has chosen cheating wife and cuckold stories as her regular genre simple because they are the most exciting stories to write and to read with the element of risk and illicit sex that spices them up, even for those who say they hate them, after having read them of course.

Look around you. The ratings of soap operas rocket when a wife is getting ready to have sex outside of the marriage - people love it. Magazines and tabloids are full of it every day and people rush out to buy them. Diana, Princess of Wales cucked Prince Charles. The woman set to become Queen of England cucked her husband with Prince Charles but when they visit America or any where else in the world you line the streets and cheer them to the echo. At the end of the day there isn't a man alive that is not a potential cuckold by its proper definition. Is that what brings out all the venom? Lynn is aware of this fear in men and she taps into it. For her the man in the story is every man on the planet. All she has to do is throw in a hairy arse and a big cock and you are on her hook.

The more taboo the haters try to make cheating wife stories the more attractive they become to good authors - like Lynn. I wonder if those who endlessly read cheating wife (cuckold) stories and profess to hate them have noticed the ongoing proliferation of authors taking to this genre.

Well done Lynn, will be reading the rest of the chapters.

Congratulations!!

"That picture got to me somehow. I got an erection looking at it. That night in bed I fucked my wife and fantasized that another guy had stripped her down and fucked her in one of the offices of my company". This is where you lost me. I didn't read any further. Low score.

Really sick fuck-wad!

Just BAD !!

Stupid cuck shit.

Well did they get rid of Art,without that information this is a nothing story.

I like it. Will read on.

How is he a lucky man.? After her admitance of fucking Ben for a fortnight he should have kicked her out.

another loser wimp husband. . cut your dick loser maybe fuck one road side dog loser. . you Don't deserve call a man. . Pathetic loser wimp

Cuck wants to hear his whore’s past dicks.

Ha ha ha

Never mind the stupid ass (arse) in the UK. 26thNC you really are a moron. Why the hell would you keep reading and commenting on stories and author's you don't like. I will give you credit though, you did respond to my message to you. To LynnGKS thank you for a good story, well written as is usual.

Mel B known as Hornydevil47