All Comments on 'The Landlord Cumeth'

I'm surprised her reaction to being told she's going to be a prostitute is just "bemused." Also it is a vicious cycle not a viscous cycle.

Thank you for pointing that out... I will be more careful with further submissions :)

This was a good story, she's certainly a quick learner, and no doubt will enjoy her new career move! Her hot little cunt's a real goldmine!

this was a great story i hope there comes more

Lots of stories of this type...but this is one of the best...and the secret is in the detail...very well put together..the right length....believeable characters...graphic detail..Thanks!

Straight in there and right to the point. Very well told story, the frantic pace and desperation of the landlord felt by the reader... definately continue this one.

If spelling mistakes are the only criticism you get then you've done a good job in my book..

Exciting.

:-)

Amazing!

A really great story. Had me dripping wet!! Loved it!

Very, very well done BUT I think he would have taken her one more time. My thought would be for him to take her ass also.

I really enjoyed your story, & hope you keep writing

The ending was strange. You kind of announced a sequel but you never submitted it.

She fucked her landlord out of financial desperation. She may have enjoyed.

However when he told her she will be prostituting herself, that was too early for Ch. 1: character development was lacking.

Would be great to add more to story. really good