by FantasyKitten723
I like it so far...I'm glad she was saved. I hope the rogue gets what is coming to him
but no matter. You have cleared up the confusion from the first chapter and set up the story for a very different probable outcome, which will only be good to a lot of readers here.
I look forward to where you see this story going next. It's a very good start! Keep going.
really nice even though the chapter was short it was much better than the first i really liked it cant wait for more.
Agreed much better than the first chapter even if it is a little short. Well done keep going.
I'm loving the story so far just make it longer its already an instant favorite