Our Secret

Rubens not Reubens

"Road Moment"?

You may already know this, but I'll say it anyway:

Although Hope and Crosby' made talking "to the audience" (while looking directly into the camera) a staple shtick of their Road films, they by no means invented the device. In stage thetre, an actor speaking directly to the audience is doing what is called "breaking the fourth wall". The character of The Stage Manager in Thornton Wilder's play "Our Town" delivers almost all of his lines in this way.

And this goes waaay back. Many lines in Shakespeare's plays are written to be delivered directly to the audience. and narrators and even Greek Choruses were doing it long before that.

The Road pictures were not even the first films to make use of the device. For instance, the Marx Brothers (particularly Groucho) frequently delivered lines as an aside to the camera.

I had never heard of this referred to as a "Road Moment" before. Did you come up with that term, or have you seen it elsewhere?

Not a criticism. Just curious,

-Rei

Not bad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It can't be over, not yet. We need more of this story. Please keep it going,Mom needs that over sized dick up her ass. I think that's how it goes. Good read ...........LAROC OF AGES

Fill Mom with joy

I agree other comments, please restart this story.
There has to be suckling of her milk filled breasts and more big cumming to help dilate her womb for the birth of the new baby

well done

I like the fact that the dad is not a complete ass, like the foreward said. Also, the chemistry between the mom and son is honest and as realistic as an erotic story gets. (I like it when the characters have more to them than just their lust.) I would like to see more work like this.

Nicely done

I was hoping to read more of their incestuous sexual relationship, and that mom was pretty much hooked on her son's cock, since it was so much bigger than her husband's

Thanks for the read.

damnnnnnn

That was really hot, I hope to see a lot more from this Family. Mom has to show Dad how his boy fills her up. while he watches...

Somewhere you forgot

the valentine's contest bit, as in it should be related to or having something to do with Valentines Day. The weak mention of "present" was, well, weak.

The passive voice and other writing errors detract. The grammar errors also hurt it.

It will obviously thrill the genre fans, but not a writing fan.

milf or mishouldn'tf

I thought it was silly. Mother, father and son taking a bath together and for many years. Of course once he grows up he is wanting to fuck his mother. All boys do.
As usual, in most of the stories that I read, the mother states that we shouldn't be doing this, but does it anyway. Stop already.

Once...

This is a gloriously wild story based on a wild time in our history. That's not the only reason that it struck me having a realistic feel, though. For me it held very strong overtones of the one - and only - time that things spiralled out of control between myself and my son (fortunately I never became pregant though!). My point, though, is that the 'one time only' scenario is the truly more likely one between mothers and sons, and it delighted me to see someone brave enough to offer such realism in their story. Thnaks for the memories and the images!

once...

Thank you, Anonymous! Ingrained societal norms will usually prevent the intimate mother/son relationship from blossoming into a sexual affair. But the intimacy is there and given the right set of circumstances, it CAN happen!

I think I can detect your remembered pleasure in you and your son's one time tryst. Perhaps, you could email the circumstances of you and your son's affair and it's aftermath. I will use it in a story about you and him.

That way you could share that most intimate moment .

this is a terrific story, and

you really can't blame either Tommy or his mother. The 18 year old boy is riddled with testosterone, his young mind is ruled by his big balls. Tommy's mom is stunned when she sees her boy's huge stiff prick, the biggest she's ever even heard of, and her cunt leaks like a faucet. Only one thing to do. Tommy's got to fit his big prick up between his mother's legs and tear her mommy-hole to pieces, finally shooting his mother a great big twatful of his creamy semen. It turns out that the boy's fucked a baby up his own mother's cunt. His mom's so proud of her big handsome boy, his big thrusting prick, and his potent young balls. Tommy's pretty damn proud of what makes him a boy, as well.