All Comments on 'The Auction Ch. 01'

by jillbird

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jo_greeneyesjo_greeneyesover 17 years ago
Fucking awesome, wished it were me.

Wow as a 20 year old girl, my imagination run wild, I lived every second with Jill, her husband must be very proud and so turned by her performance, wicked, well done,I will have to do a solo, just to get some refief and comfortable,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow!

Wow, the first chapter is even more brill than the second, which I read first.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Better and Better

We, your audience want more from you.

A scream can be a beautiful sound!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fuck no

I might have said okay. But when starting to do that. I would pull a gun and blow someones head off.

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Divorce the cunt, applicable to both major characters but especially the husband who needs to be sold himself, and horsewhipped the asshole.

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