Keep writing I love this story.
Sorry, a big miss on your part.
You went off the rails in the last four paragraphs.
"Uppity" is fraught with a history of racism, and therefore bears a negative connotation. Generally, any black person who thought well of themselves was said to be "uppity." Now, we're generally labeled as "arrogant." Just look at the negative remarks about the President. They usually feature this description. In that way, this was a poor choice of words. Other than that, a bit facile as a story, but certainly as minimally entertaining as any other short story on the site.
You did a fantastic job with this story! Very well written and tastefully done. In fact, it's 10 times better than the majority of stories that are posted here. Please continue with your writing! I'd love to read more of your work!
Good job writing this story - I look forward to more of your work!
"Nigger Slave" Uppity" WTF?.....I do hope a black woman with any self worth would call herself "NIGGER SLAVE! SMDH This story was sad.
I was so upset I typed incorrectly.
The author needs writing lessons, far too many and frequent use of "..." wrecking the story.
Frenchman, you really need to take Writing 100: a beginners course, because you need it!
I love it as I could image a young Jade Fire as the Jade in the story.
Okay I have to say I was not loving this story at all, the plot was a good one, The story started off great ,however some of the wording and language not so much.
To each there own when it comes to writing I get that and respect it.
What the frick?????? That was pure garbage
This is tripe. A WoC can not be a racist towards a white man, racism is Power + Privilege, which a WoC does not have over a white man. The use of racial slurs also shows your lack of creativeness, stop trying to be Quentin Tarantino.
Point that has not been addressed already - cheating is not "swinging". When a couple of women, no matter what the color of their skin, cheat on their husbands without their knowledge, it's called cheating. Not "swinging". Swinging implies an open marriage where both parties engage in sex with people other than their partners.
Way to break the stereotypes by making a couple of black women into cheating sluts. Right.
I didn't know it'll be like this, i love interracial, hate racism. can't hang.
Racism is hatred of a person or people based on their race. The "power + privilege" definition is used by people to justify their racism without calling it hatred. Justification of racism is for small-minded, hate-filled people. Since there are black people with power and privilege over white people the justification for racism is flawed and doesn't work. Racism and hatred don't work, especially in an area of interracial stories.
This a great love story with some a little kink. Please continue writing
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