by MsArcher
I love this story, it's developing really well. Please take your time, I am glad this chapter is a bit longer. Ohh he must have been obsessed with her for a long time, can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you.
That was sublime eroticism; at its finest! That was so unbelievably hot, the tension, the conflict and eventual surrender.
Why Ms Archer, I do believe you have a supreme talent and am still wondering when you are gonna quite your day job.
A great, great story. Each chapter is better than the prior one. I am looking forward to the next one.
Thanks!
It is so rare to find a story that has everything. Erotic, yet extremely well written. Even the non erotic parts are impossible to skim over; they add to the eroticism and power of the sexually charged moments in the story. Over all... one of the best series I have read, and I hope you write more. Check out my submissions... though, my writing does not compare with yours!
Marvelous!
...and when I say that I mean inevery way...story, writing, erotic content...just about perfect!
Beautifully written. You have a way with words, MsArcher! Bravo! This story is another wonderful discovery in Literotica. Thanks for sharing it with us! I'm breathlessly anticipating the next chapter!
So looking forward to your next chapter. This is well written and a unexpected find.
I was pulled in from the get-go and I am 100% hooked!!!! The build and tension and frustration is just so perfect!! Please please please keep writing! This is written so much better than 1/2 the crap I pay for on Amazon by some well known authors and I just can't believe this is your first attempt at writing!! Truly gifted!!! I'm loving me some Franco!
Please keep the Chapter's coming (no pun intended), I'm so hooked to this story & I can't wait to read what happens next.
I love love love this story!!! Make more chapters!! Pretty please!!
This is unbelievably well written- please keep up the great work. Will definitely check back every day so don't keep us waiting too long!!
You're a talented writer,very sensual!Can't wait to read the next chapter!Thanks for sharing.xoxo
Please, please, please write another chapter soon! This is one of my favourite series on this site right now. I keep checking back for the next installment; I never do that. Please.
Ladies!! (and gentlemen readers)
My deepest apologies for leaving you hanging so long! Sadly, I haven't quit my day job, and I've been inundated with work.
I've started Chapter 4, and I promise to make it worth the wait. (Believe me, I'm every bit the "Franco-phile" you are, and anxious to see how things play out.)
I'm going to aim for a posting in ONE WEEK. Stay tuned, and thank you for your patience!
I was about to give up hope for the story. Can not wait for next chapter.
Thank you for the update. It makes my incessant checking for the next chapter worth while!
Totally want so more of this story please finish it. If you stop now it is way to much of a cliff hanger.
I luv this story!! I'm hooked, the anticipation of the next ch. is killing me!! Plz keep writing!!
I hope that you'll post more of this story. The story line is intriguing. You have such a wonderful talent for writing. You've got me totally into the characters. I love the way Franco is so protective of his men and is extending that to Samantha. I really need more of this story! Please come back.
Please keep writing this story! I would love to keep reading about this fantastic dynamic that you've created between these two strong characters!!!
I was wondering if you could update us on your progress with chapter 4? I would really appreciate it as I really enjoyed the previous ones and can't wait for the next! Thanks!
So good! I really love this, and hope we get a chapter four soon!
That was so good. You made Franco sound like an incredibly thoughtful guy despite all his purported evilness. He sounds like he genuinely cares for Samantha. I hope you update soon!
Readers - I could never apologize enough for my absence!
I promise I haven't abandoned our story - but work has made it extremely difficult to keep up, and I'm finding it harder to do the story justice with what little free time I have.
That said, I have taken great pains on crafting the next chapter. I sincerely hope it should be posted within a day or two!!
Thank you for your support and (seemingly) infinite patience!
Any update on the status of the latest chapter? I keep hoping it'll post but nothing yet. =(
Totally hooked on this ,please continue in your time as I feel a good one is in works .
I honestly love this story, it is completely enthralling and I would love it if you could continue it soon.
Whatever it is holding you back from continuing this absolutely wonderful narrative, please, please overcome it...
Just stumbled upon your story today. Really enjoying it. Do you plan to finish it?
Trust me, I know... That was an inexcusably long hiatus. :(
Where? Is it supposed to be posted or have you just submitted it? Checked New, checked your page, and checked new nonconsent, also checked BDSM just in case you switched genres.
I spoke too soon! I submitted yesterday - hopefully we'll be up in a couple more days.
This is a super good story. I'm incredibly impressed how you manage to convey physical pleasure along with mental resistance. So many authors in the noncon/reluctance don't illustrate how a real person would feel in the situation. You captured perfectly the right mood. I'm definately a fan.
Great story! The kind where you gotta take care of business if you know what I mean ;) Tonight I I will fantasize about being Samantha...
What a great read. Can’t wait to get the next chapter. Bravo.
"he pull on all four bedposts caused them to creak as she bucked in pleasure. It was a pounding, plummeting waterfall she rode into the abyss of ecstasy -- wave upon wave of sublimity, exhilaration, perfection emanating through her core. Involuntarily, she drew the current inward, registering the fullness of his fingers inside of her."
This is gorgeous. A woman brought to bliss, against her will in a sense, is a beautiful thing to behold. To read this entire chapter made me feel like I could feel not the tip but just beyond the tip of my tongue licking her. My mother used to call it "the broad part of the tongue." I remember her orgasm as being desperate. It has been so many years. Almost nineteen. Yet right now, I can hear the brutality of her cum. The author has brought me great pleasure in bringing this to life so very well.