All Comments on 'Capo di Foia Ch. 03'

by MsArcher

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ale1975ale1975about 11 years ago

Great job, I'm login this story!

MaynessMaynessabout 11 years ago
Getting Better and Better!

I love this story, it's developing really well. Please take your time, I am glad this chapter is a bit longer. Ohh he must have been obsessed with her for a long time, can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you.

LadyPartsLadyPartsabout 11 years ago
Ho- Lee-effing- Mother of God!

That was sublime eroticism; at its finest! That was so unbelievably hot, the tension, the conflict and eventual surrender.

Why Ms Archer, I do believe you have a supreme talent and am still wondering when you are gonna quite your day job.

meh4912meh4912about 11 years ago
I LOVE this!

A great, great story. Each chapter is better than the prior one. I am looking forward to the next one.

Thanks!

January85January85about 11 years ago
Wonderful!

It is so rare to find a story that has everything. Erotic, yet extremely well written. Even the non erotic parts are impossible to skim over; they add to the eroticism and power of the sexually charged moments in the story. Over all... one of the best series I have read, and I hope you write more. Check out my submissions... though, my writing does not compare with yours!

Marvelous!

josephstevensjosephstevensabout 11 years ago
Very Few Better...

...and when I say that I mean inevery way...story, writing, erotic content...just about perfect!

elle1802elle1802about 11 years ago
WOW.

Beautifully written. You have a way with words, MsArcher! Bravo! This story is another wonderful discovery in Literotica. Thanks for sharing it with us! I'm breathlessly anticipating the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More more more!

Eagerly awaiting the next installment :) Any updates?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

So looking forward to your next chapter. This is well written and a unexpected find.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome!

Keep writing! Please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Love it. Can't wait for more!

didntseeuxtheredidntseeuxthereabout 11 years ago
Love it!

Keep going! Absolutely divine!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wowzas!!!

I was pulled in from the get-go and I am 100% hooked!!!! The build and tension and frustration is just so perfect!! Please please please keep writing! This is written so much better than 1/2 the crap I pay for on Amazon by some well known authors and I just can't believe this is your first attempt at writing!! Truly gifted!!! I'm loving me some Franco!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This is my favorite story!!! By Far---Great!

Please keep the Chapter's coming (no pun intended), I'm so hooked to this story & I can't wait to read what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Amazing!!

I love love love this story!!! Make more chapters!! Pretty please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

This is unbelievably well written- please keep up the great work. Will definitely check back every day so don't keep us waiting too long!!

LadyPartsLadyPartsabout 11 years ago
<*> <*> <.> <.>

Those are my eyes... Looking for another chapter....

DemureKittenDemureKittenabout 11 years ago
Brilliant!

You're a talented writer,very sensual!Can't wait to read the next chapter!Thanks for sharing.xoxo

JDTWJDTWalmost 11 years ago

I hope you continue this story! very intriguing!

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyalmost 11 years ago
so, yeah

You gonna continue this story, or what? We are awaitin...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
nice.

Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More!

Please, please, please write another chapter soon! This is one of my favourite series on this site right now. I keep checking back for the next installment; I never do that. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

OMG! More please!

MsArcherMsArcheralmost 11 years agoAuthor
Taking up the pen again

Ladies!! (and gentlemen readers)

My deepest apologies for leaving you hanging so long! Sadly, I haven't quit my day job, and I've been inundated with work.

I've started Chapter 4, and I promise to make it worth the wait. (Believe me, I'm every bit the "Franco-phile" you are, and anxious to see how things play out.)

I'm going to aim for a posting in ONE WEEK. Stay tuned, and thank you for your patience!

emidozaemidozaalmost 11 years ago
about time, yah!

I was about to give up hope for the story. Can not wait for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hooray!

Thank you for the update. It makes my incessant checking for the next chapter worth while!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
COOL!!!!!

Totally want so more of this story please finish it. If you stop now it is way to much of a cliff hanger.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Please finish this! It's getting really good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I luv this story!! I'm hooked, the anticipation of the next ch. is killing me!! Plz keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Can we have another chapter please?

claireacquiredclaireacquiredalmost 11 years ago
I'm hooked...

I hope that you'll post more of this story. The story line is intriguing. You have such a wonderful talent for writing. You've got me totally into the characters. I love the way Franco is so protective of his men and is extending that to Samantha. I really need more of this story! Please come back.

strawberrywine27strawberrywine27almost 11 years ago
Please keep writing!

Please keep writing this story! I would love to keep reading about this fantastic dynamic that you've created between these two strong characters!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hooked

please don't stop there ..I just found the story ..its great

KittenCuddlerKittenCuddlerover 10 years ago
Pretty please can we have an update?

I was wondering if you could update us on your progress with chapter 4? I would really appreciate it as I really enjoyed the previous ones and can't wait for the next! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love this!

So good! I really love this, and hope we get a chapter four soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

That was so good. You made Franco sound like an incredibly thoughtful guy despite all his purported evilness. He sounds like he genuinely cares for Samantha. I hope you update soon!

MsArcherMsArcherover 10 years agoAuthor
Soon!

Readers - I could never apologize enough for my absence!

I promise I haven't abandoned our story - but work has made it extremely difficult to keep up, and I'm finding it harder to do the story justice with what little free time I have.

That said, I have taken great pains on crafting the next chapter. I sincerely hope it should be posted within a day or two!!

Thank you for your support and (seemingly) infinite patience!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
With you

Yes, please! Do continue this story

alreadytakenalreadytakenover 10 years ago
Update??

Any update on the status of the latest chapter? I keep hoping it'll post but nothing yet. =(

asjahstrinaasjahstrinaover 10 years ago
Drawn in

Totally hooked on this ,please continue in your time as I feel a good one is in works .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
forever

really love your story im stuck on it please finish Writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Please Update Soon

I honestly love this story, it is completely enthralling and I would love it if you could continue it soon.

jadeAjadeAalmost 10 years ago
Come back please...!

Whatever it is holding you back from continuing this absolutely wonderful narrative, please, please overcome it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Any Plans To Finish?

Just stumbled upon your story today. Really enjoying it. Do you plan to finish it?

MsArcherMsArcherover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 4 is up!

Trust me, I know... That was an inexcusably long hiatus. :(

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 9 years ago
Chapter 4?

Where? Is it supposed to be posted or have you just submitted it? Checked New, checked your page, and checked new nonconsent, also checked BDSM just in case you switched genres.

MsArcherMsArcherover 9 years agoAuthor
Pending approval

I spoke too soon! I submitted yesterday - hopefully we'll be up in a couple more days.

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

What an exquisitely, intense, erotic scene.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Perfectly Illustrated

This is a super good story. I'm incredibly impressed how you manage to convey physical pleasure along with mental resistance. So many authors in the noncon/reluctance don't illustrate how a real person would feel in the situation. You captured perfectly the right mood. I'm definately a fan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
My heart is still racing....

Great story! The kind where you gotta take care of business if you know what I mean ;) Tonight I I will fantasize about being Samantha...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
write more!

I can't stand it! Please finish this story!

Horseman68Horseman68over 5 years ago
Great Writing.

What a great read. Can’t wait to get the next chapter. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"he pull on all four bedposts caused them to creak as she bucked in pleasure. It was a pounding, plummeting waterfall she rode into the abyss of ecstasy -- wave upon wave of sublimity, exhilaration, perfection emanating through her core. Involuntarily, she drew the current inward, registering the fullness of his fingers inside of her."

This is gorgeous. A woman brought to bliss, against her will in a sense, is a beautiful thing to behold. To read this entire chapter made me feel like I could feel not the tip but just beyond the tip of my tongue licking her. My mother used to call it "the broad part of the tongue." I remember her orgasm as being desperate. It has been so many years. Almost nineteen. Yet right now, I can hear the brutality of her cum. The author has brought me great pleasure in bringing this to life so very well.

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