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This guy can't write a decent story.
Usual wimp tale from him. Looks at his scores.
1* you have no idea about how to write a story, there's no thought being given to what you write, no substance whatsoever!
Bullshit
Why? Write about something different. Maybe something that will hold my interest. Keep trying.
The joke became thin.
Like the protagonist's dick - well below average. 3*
Thanks for the offering. This marriage will be ending soon. Have fun!
I hate willing cuckolds
died a painfull death stubby
makes me smile
I know most of the tales are just stories in some people's mines... But a lot of them are based on fact rather than fiction... I can give you song and verse of situations..
The 'medium' bit just didn't work
it became a very tired joke very quickly in what was basically an 'I want my wife to try a bigger cock than mine' story.
Are you gay?
Or just a wimp?
Juvenile . . .
. . . writing. Do much better or try something else.
writing
is not your thing so wake up and do something else.
Better than 'Twice!'
The very best I can say is that this is better than 'Twice' (also offered today!)
But not a LOT!
2*
Hysterical Satire
5 stars.
Glad to see that Lit commentators remain humourless curmudgeons.
This Is Funny**
Not good just funny.
MEDIUM COCK IS NICE AND FUNNY
Nice and funny story.I look forward to a very large cock story from the writer.
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