Usual wimp tale from him. Looks at his scores.
1* you have no idea about how to write a story, there's no thought being given to what you write, no substance whatsoever!
Why? Write about something different. Maybe something that will hold my interest. Keep trying.
Like the protagonist's dick - well below average. 3*
Thanks for the offering. This marriage will be ending soon. Have fun!
died a painfull death stubby
I know most of the tales are just stories in some people's mines... But a lot of them are based on fact rather than fiction... I can give you song and verse of situations..
it became a very tired joke very quickly in what was basically an 'I want my wife to try a bigger cock than mine' story.
Or just a wimp?
. . . writing. Do much better or try something else.
is not your thing so wake up and do something else.
The very best I can say is that this is better than 'Twice' (also offered today!)
But not a LOT!
Glad to see that Lit commentators remain humourless curmudgeons.
Not good just funny.
Nice and funny story.I look forward to a very large cock story from the writer.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!
orBack to Medium Cock
orMore submissions by John Randolph.
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Medium Cock:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to John Randolph:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Login or Sign Up
All contents © Copyright 1998-2012. Literotica is a trademark. No part may be reproduced in any form without explicit written permission.
Terms Of Services|Report A Problem|Privacy
Password:Forgot your password?
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.