All Comments on 'A Mistress and Her Slave Ch. 01'

Good start,please continue.

I second the above comment. Very hot. Want to read more exploits.

Wow! Hot, intense and immensely direct! Total BOING!

I just love Your writing Mistress!

I have just finished reading Chapter 1 of A Mistress and Her Slave and just love it. Not only is it very erotic but it is also very well written, which shows that you not only have a very vivid imagination, but you also a skilled writer. Well done!

similar to a certain site where the Domme died..

not sure if story there had reached finality or was true..

anyway like yours..

While I don't mean to put a hamper on this delicious story, and pleasure the female master is feeling about her new slave. But wouldn't an erection, if kept overnight and not allowed to subside, cause irreparable damage?

Mistress: I would love to happen to me what you describe in this article. I am completely shaved and eager to be trained to serve. I love being naked and would be willing to do what ever you ask. I want to be owned completely.

Submissive Male

I would love to be this fellow. To be naked and owned completely is something I would love to happen to me. I have already shaved my body and when naked, I have nothing to hide. I truly enjoy being in this state and would love to have a mistress. The idea of having my clothing locked in a locker also excites me.

Excellent story, Mistress.

Please, more!

Yes too short but oh how I wish he were me.

Great life style story....This really turns me on...Ready to read chapter 2.

superb.

I want one

Good beginning! slave is shown it can obey, hear and listen. Immediate doing 1st command!

Kept naked! Yes! this slave was soon shaved of all body hair, to enforce Her ownership!

Seldom allowed cover of any kind! Especially if Friends are present!

Being desirous of being a slave to a strict lady myself, I felt quite envious of Jared. I think you are a superb writer, and I hope you will read some of my stories. I like to think I have become a little more professional in my approach to AAA Stud, which I have recently started writing.