by joshy029
great storie so far, I do think you need a few more creative ideas here and there is alot of spelling mistakes here, try to catch more of these in the future and you will be fine
This whole series is quite astonishing. It's very well put together, for the most part, too! Take your time with this series, do what you want with it, getting ideas from the readers.
This is a fantastic series, and... just sexy as hell. Thank you.
That's all I can really say. Your work has inspired me to write my own, Sir. Continue your work, be it this series or not. You sir, are a true, full-blooded, undeniable GENIUS!!
Needs more talking. Not enough speech going IMO. But even so, I have loved this story since I first discovered it.
Can I ask if Amy is going to become more horse-like? Not a centaur or or horse face , but like ears or a tail?
love itjust what grils like huge cock first time and all that grily thing thay like are you going to write more to horse-cock gril pls do and soon yours leann xx
any of the girls taking the other two home with her to meet the parents where mom and dad get a real surprise..
How about raking all of that dock into her cunt,make her faint cum fill her whole cunt track,uterus too7D8E
Way back when we met Scarlet, you said she was born with a penis *instead of* a vagina. Now, she has a vagina. (You did say she was a hermaphrodite, but . . .)
The girls going out and having sex in the bathroom was awesome. I've been waiting for Amy and Scarlet to get together. Very exciting scene being in a public bathroom stall, worrying about being caught, however both loose there selves in the passion of the moment even though Amy showed concern over Scarlets pain of being stretched like never before. Congratulations, you outdid yourself on this one. Sorry to hear that there won't be many more chapters.