All Comments on 'Screw Me'

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BigB88BigB88about 11 years ago
Needs a lot of work

It could have been good, but there were far too many spelling/grammar errors. I would also recommend stretching out the story a little with details or more variety in what is going on, unless you were going for something really short.

oldefarteoldefarteabout 11 years ago
find an editor

good concept but very distracting grammatical errors.

i.e. paragraph 2 line 1 "While typing she [mad] moved one [had] to her bottom to fix her short skirt,"

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