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by Anonymous

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by blkhrt01/31/13

wtf

Wtf!!!!

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by mick195301/31/13

GOOD JOB!

Nice narrative, believable people and a good kick you in the guts ending!

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by Anonymous02/03/13

Yikes

Porn by Arthur Miller. (Death of an Orgasm?)

In all seriousness, it's quite well-written, the narrator's voice is very clear, and the matter-of-fact way he talks about his life actually creates more pathos than florid, flowery prose. You definitely get mixed feelings for him, since a lot of his pain comes from his own bad choices...and yet, you know he can't really see that...

This one stays with you. I'm going to be thinking about this.

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by Anonymous02/07/13

I liked it!

Consequences.

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by Oleguy03/10/13

That was a ripper.

Had no idea what I was getting myself into when I started running down the list of contest place getters.
l don't know why but you came up with one of those memorable pieces which, as someone else said, lasts for a darn long time.

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