All Comments on 'Jack in the Cast'

Looks like a story that can support a second chapter. Curious to see what else Kathy dreams up for Jack and how he takes care of her when the cast comes off.

My pleasure.

The 'valentines' connection was a bit weak but it worked well enough to get things going. Writing quality is fine, dialogue is a bit stilted and unrealistic but it works for the purpose. Didn't particularly need the 'inch long nipples' and 'biggest breasts ever' bits - it was enough that 'her womanly curves excited him'.

Good luck with the contest.

Kathy sounds like a truly wonderful woman, and you nailed the bit about people who consider themselves unattractive and how they smolder underneath more than anyone. I just hope Jack gets over his self-pitying and appreciates what a treasure has been dropped in his lap!

Who needs the aggravation? And who would trust a bitch like that? Ridiculous story.

love it . He should have a male female / encounters

Play on! Let's see what happens when he gets out. I'd like to see a reversal where she gets her turn in a cast, even if it's just a leg or arms.

I was in a body cast following a terrible automobile crash. I sustained two broken arms, three cracked or broken ribs, left leg broken in three places, a punctured lung, lacerations to my jaw and forehead, and retina damage in both eyes. One night a nurse, I assume came into my room and wordlessly gave me a mind-blowing blowjob. I never truly knew who my angel of mercy was, but there was one that filled that role in my fantasies.

This was fun. I wish there was a part 2!

Oh dang, this story pushes all my buttons. The part where she smears her pussy juice on his upper lip and he begs her to make him cum got me so hard!!

Funny!