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ArjayEiffArjayEiffabout 11 years agoAuthor
31 Tanka

All 31 are free here: http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/ArjayEiff

I'll be posting them here over time

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
Really liked this one r j f

5 ed

DesejoDesejoabout 11 years ago
Liked this

Normally double spacing on poems is not something I like, but in this case it works, because it gives the reader time to absorb each line. Well done.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Perfect Tanka

Great form - well understated - nice - Sweet O.

demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Good -

and a nice descriptive piece in so few words!

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