All Comments on 'Feeling Free'

excellent first story. hopefully he'll fuck both of them in the next chapter !

needs a proof read..but good content

This was a good story but there needs to be more owrk doen on the editing.

Grace, a very good first effort; there were numerous typos, which were distracting, but you did a great job of developing the story line. I look forward to seeing where you go with this story.

In this genre for a first submission. Maybe a followup?

Lee

I really like the thought of a voluptuous mature woman

enjoying young cock - especially in her mouth and anus.

Love your stories.

hi there, hope everything is good. I know it's been a while, but please write more :-)

Sorry to hear that but this a good start

****Thanks for the read.