All Comments on 'The Wolf's Captive Ch. 02'
by anais_v
- 32 Comments
SweetGaspsabout 11 years agoI waited and waited, checking daily for an update on this story...was excited to see there was an update!!
The only slight let down was where it left off, right where it got me completely flustered and hot!
Adore the stor, how it is written, the characters and everything about it. Please do continue as I can not wait for the next installment.
ariesgirlabout 11 years agoI'm thinking Cedric's human side is not going to win. He already cares for Rowena so he need to stop being stubborn. I'm quite sure he won't be happy if some other man claims her.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI am absolutely in love with this story. I can't wait to see in what direction you head next. Please keep writing and sharing.
Roxy_Soxyabout 11 years agoI have always loved historical fiction and werewolf stories. This is the best of both worlds. I love this and can't wait for more. Thanks. :)
Anonymousabout 11 years agoIm obsessed now im going to be constantly looking for the next one ! Yhuuve officaly sucked me in I havent read a story like this is forever yhuur are beyond great ! Omg god this had me biteing my nails and curling my toes god dont stop please yhuul break my heart!
willieoneabout 11 years agoWonderful chapter and look forward to the next installment..soon I hope as patience is not one of my strong points.
Mevanvyabout 11 years agoIt's nice to see someone describing it right:
"This riding double was no crime
"In the first great Edward's time;
"No brave man thought himself disgrac'd
"By two fair arms about his waist;
"Nor did the lady blush vermilion,
"Dancing on the lover's pillion."
Just like riding a motorcycle. The dude's almost always in the front, and the girl's on the back hanging on. The historical and cultural accuracy is appreciated amongst nerds such as myself.
Carry on! The story's great! :)
countrygirlflaabout 11 years agoSitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter,please dont let it be too long before the next one!!!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoExcellent story and character development. The medieval setting is captivating and I am hooked already. I can't wait to read more so please post often. :-) 5 stars from me.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoStory had a great plot, the characters and their interactions make all kind of wonderful sense, and your grammar if fantastic! That alone, is worth five starts. But, you've also managed to give this story that intangible something that makes me want to read it all day long! Keep up the good work!
hepmemommyabout 11 years agoI am an avid reader of all genres. So it is saying something when I say this was a great start. From the first you drew the reader in and quickly established characters we related to. Keep up the good work. I cant wait for the next installment!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoAwesome story so far.. I was sold on the first chapter... bought and paid for on the second! More Please!
edzellskyabout 11 years agoTo one who obviously can, don't dispair, if you write we will read. I enjoy your style and look forward to seeing how you develope the story.
willieoneabout 11 years agoI made the mistake of adding you to my favourites and like many other on my favourite list the chapters have dried up. Sigh. It is so frustrating when you find a story that you really like only to have the author stop! Please continue!!
anais_vabout 11 years agoAuthor@ willieone
I'm finishing up the 3rd part, been too busy lately to find the time to devote to this
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI hope the third part continues to be as good. I'll be watching for it!
willieoneabout 11 years agoOk you said you were finishing up chapter three but that was way back on the 30/3/13 it is now 20/4/13 and am still trying to wait patiently I hope it is close to being posted!
LadyPartsalmost 11 years agoAnais, I hope you haven't become side tracked with real life? I hope this story still burns inside you? This is such an excellent story it would be a shame to leave it unfinished. Can I suggest you post what you have thus far? I think getting something posted will help you if you have been feeling blocked. Seeing the reader count, the scores and comments really does act as muse.
Please take pity on us poor slobs who have fallen captive to you fabulous captive story! Dont worry if it's not up to your standards, you can always go back and edit again once you have reconnected with your muse...
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThese were both good stories. I hope there is a chapter 3. I love the werewolf stories.
DragonEmperessalmost 11 years agoThere have been some issues with submissions disappearing - if it has been more than a week since you submitted your next chapter please please re-submit. It is a hassle I know but we are eager to see your work continue!
willieonealmost 11 years agoI agree with everything that LadyParts has said I love this story and would hate to see it vanish, please finish it!
You fan Willie
anais_valmost 11 years agoAuthorHopefully it will be up soon, it's been submitted now. Sorry for the delay and I appreciate all of the feedback!
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