All Comments on 'The Decision Ch. 01'

by Valentine_Goosebumps

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eWomaneWomanabout 11 years ago
Interesting set-up...

will be reading to see how you craft it out. Nice piece...take care

Lionheart61Lionheart61about 11 years ago
Hmmmm

This has good potential. I only rated it three stars because right now that's all it is..... potential.

subsonjasubsonjaabout 11 years ago
Very good.

Nice start, i can not wait to read some more.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
That was a great start!

Please bring us Chapter 2 as soon as you can! Five stars for a very promising start to what will, I am sure, be a major story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Interesting

More pls

AnomandarisAnomandarisabout 11 years ago

Interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Will you be finishing this series?

Story looks like it has a lot of potential. Can you please see this through to the end?

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