All Comments on 'Good Girl'

by MmeShiraz

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Slut, slut, slut, flithy fucking whore.........why is that necessary? This story would have been just as good, even better, without that. If he is so proud of her how about some positive verbage. So sick of the supposed erotic name calling.

Your write an otherwise hot story. Challenge yourself as a writer. Impress the audience by giving us hotness, submission and strong dominance with class.

Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowabout 11 years ago
It IS positive verbiage

That the point. To her, that's how he expresses his love for her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hmmm

well its kinda sad that her dad calles her slut but other wise I liked it.

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