by MmeShiraz
Slut, slut, slut, flithy fucking whore.........why is that necessary? This story would have been just as good, even better, without that. If he is so proud of her how about some positive verbage. So sick of the supposed erotic name calling.
Your write an otherwise hot story. Challenge yourself as a writer. Impress the audience by giving us hotness, submission and strong dominance with class.
That the point. To her, that's how he expresses his love for her.
well its kinda sad that her dad calles her slut but other wise I liked it.